|Reviews for english class|
| sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
wow. this totally coordinates with your other poem. i dig it.
| laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
there's something really intriguing in that suppressed smile...very good imagery...i thought it was really humorous at first, but something more serious does resonate behind the lines...very good job...
| wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Hmm... I'm not quite sure why I like this so much. It's intriguing, m'dear. Well done.
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
Man, you sure know how to draw in the reviews. I was like, holy crap, I'd like to get that many reviews for something I've written. Anyways, cute poem. I myself am not a huge Shakespeare fan, just b/c it's all you ever hear. Yeah, that's why I'm a journalism major and not a literature major. (It's required to take a Shakespeare class at my college for a lit major. Yawn.) Anyways. Keep writing! :)
| roseallie chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
short but sweet, love the way its written.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
we can all relate to this one.. great job
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
my teacher hasn't even STARTED on Shakespear & it just breaks me, i really want to read Hamlet (since i adore Ophelia) but Romeo & Juliet just...bugs me. it is beautiful and classic, overdone and drone (too predictable, but haunting at once oo. it just never FULLY fancied me 'til really recently, even then i have my doubts; i found this just so..."omg!1! i luv it~! XD write mores plz. kthnx" yeah, i'm illiterate today. this is sweetly cute, sing-song in tone with a subtle: "i am about to rip my head off if we talk about this (beautiful) play ONE MORE TIME-" maybe i;'m odd. i don't know, i just felt it. i loved it, just so you know.
| Pricilla Grey chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Short and sweet, I liked it.
- Pricilla Grey
| kelsi bones chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
I understand what you mean about 'i think it would be better if(you and)me go away.'I had '(you and) i' because i wrote the poem so it could be read with out the brackets. I admit, your way does sound better when reading with brackets, but with out, it says 'i think it would be better if me go away.' I did want it to say me, but it didn't make sense.
Thank you for you review :)
| just dani chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
this is cute...and it leaves room for imagination
| Skarlog chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
This sounds familiar, I have no idea why ..
| NurseDelilah chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
for some reason I just smiled when I read. It may be short, but kudos to you for making it so pleasant
| account not in use chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
nice feeling in this. made me smile.
| city still breathing chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
I like the sing-song voice here. It's cute. I can just picture this girl smiling deviously as the teacher blathers about something irrelevant... and the slant rhyme suppressed/juliet. it's pretty.. sadistic.