Reviews for Leaving
a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
this was awesome(!) i think this is your best work from what i have read, just everything about it. the way it was written, the details, the words, everything was picked out so perfectly i can't even pick a certain part i liked more than others, because it was all so great.
Fatty chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
k... this poem is obviously about missing someone... so you got your point across. good enough for me.

clarz chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
i absolutly L-O-V-E the first two lines. i read them and i was like i have to make a song with that in it!
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Beautiful wording... Beautiful poem.
Helen William chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Great Poem I like the first line I never got to see your smiling face, this is a beautiful poem full of emotions

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