|Reviews for monologue on origami angels, anesthetic & alcohol|
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
that just emanates *power*
i wish i could give you more,
but i'm just sort of speechless.
| emergency room romantic chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
sometimes poems leave you breathless, and speechless, and numb inside.
this is one of them - -
absolutely fucking gorgeous.
| contrast and friction chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
Sorry for the late review..
But, wow this is just beautiful. Every single line is so powerful and so intense. It's just really really amazing. I like the formatting too, it isn't too overdone and it definitely adds to the piece. This piece is going on faves :)
| agirlnamed-aly chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
I don't really know what to say about this. The use of words alone is enough to grab my utmost attention; they're weaved together so so perfectly and powerfully.
I do think some people will have trouble interpreting exactly what the poem means - but I feel I really understand the feelings and emotions behind, mostly because I've gone through a similar experience.
A part of this poem that really stood out for me were:
"i don’t know what i first saw in you, maybe the passion against a disintegrating world but nowi understand it was only your inability to accept anythingcontrary to yourself, anything not perfect"
That really hit home for me. I absolutely loved it.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
holy shit, this was amazing. pure art here, each line was so perfert. 'onionskin-fragile words' beautiful. this was incredible.
|thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 1/6/2006|
| phthalo blue chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Amazing! I loved " your selfish litany of dreams, the ecstasy of visions/delusions against a break sun, the methodical again-dissection of the half-life" It's just amazing! I'm speechless.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Wonderful the way you entwine the abstract and the concrete images. This is really like an outburst of a running inner monologue that keeps biting at the intended then drops some light images in to the flow. Good work.
| sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 1/6/2006