Reviews for The Artistry of Lies
Grayhome chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
I'll say this much: I got goosebumps, and that's good.
mac1012 chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Like any other readers who had read your work; you've captured me with your ideal talents in writing poems such as this one..

The story of the poem is well written, exceptionally, indeed...

"Lies are woven, not by ourselves, but by the people we often trust ourselves into. Thus, making us the victims of insincerity."

Haha! That was just random.. Thinking about your written poem made me evoke that thought.. My apologies, really.. ;D

Keep it up!
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Favorite line: "You are made of a strand of lies." A great opening line, b/c it sets up exactly what the poem is going to be about, and is a great metaphor. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
As always your talent with words makes me envy you.
Sterces chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
I envy your talent. . . . . .

Wow . . . . . .

Time To Change chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
this really moved me. Its beautiful written, gets across a point perfectly and is very thought provoking.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
i like this.. it's well written.. i really love the whole necklace thing and hte ending is great too.. nicely done
Autumnymph chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
I like the last line. "Are dreams woven by artist such as you."
phthalo blue chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
I loved this poem, especially the end. "And lies are not lies at all, but in truth are dreams woven by artists such as you." Beautifully written, true, and thought-provoking.