HAHA! well i'll be dammned! haha thank god someone finally voiced my thoughts..

HALEY IS SO SHALLOW!

GO SPENCE! YEY finally.. honestly though... Haley was so stupid..so shallow..

i wonder where things will go from here..!

ALL THE BEST :) - anna d.

This is much higher quality than most I see here. Keep it up!

Still loving the story, and you update quicker than anyone, GOOD! Well keep going I know that they have to be together, I mean it would sux if they didnt. Update soon!

ooh write more! cant wait!xox

Update soon! I want to see how she tells him.

~writerofdreams

Okay I like it and can't wait for more. Also I don't know if you know this or not but when you say something like I love him, Haley thought to herself, you can either put it in italics or these 'lalal'. I dont know what those are called but yeah maybe u get the point. This will help others when reading it. Also watch ur grammar and things. Remember the details! Sorry for sounding critcal... Update soon!

at first, it seems too sudden for Hayley to feel this way, but when you think about it, it makes sense.i want to know what his reaction is!

Someone is in love, and I knew it from the beginning. Just a little note the first set of dashes you really dont need. To be rejected so much he really keep trying and I like that about him. Keep updating, I am loving it.

FINALLY! -jumps up and down with joy- What ever shall happen next? O.o Update soon!

~writerofdreams

hey! :P dying his hair was what i had in mind! i mean if i was spencer i would have dyed my hair long ago.. and i couldnt believe they were at the salon and he got his hair back to blond.. er well.. at least the ending was kind of a progress..

poor spencer..still i can relate to haley..sometimes frends are just frends.. lol..that is i hope not the case here.. but i bet haley will be going thru a long phase of denial.

keep writing :) all the best - anna

YES! sweet.

hey you! GOSH WHAT IS UP WITH HALEY.. like i totally just want to like SLAP HER to reality.. ucckk! poor poor spencer.. :( *sniff* all the flowers.. how swet!

honestly what is up with HALEY! she is honestly.. gr okay enough.. umm.. the chapter was longer :P

some stuffs i thought i'd mention.. errmm there was one point in this chapter that you changed point of views..just one paragraph..when Haley describes how being in spencers arms made her feel safe..all that.. well prior and after that paragraph the pov was spencers..

alsoo..since people (like myself) have been telling u on and on to have longer chapters.. to drag out the details and things (it sucks dont it :P boring to write but..not as boring to read) umm..a tip could be that.. for example you wrote that Spencer was planning something all day ... you had time gaps which you indicated with the hypens (-) hehe.. well a way for you to avoid having those random moments in time (and short chapters) is you could bring the person (the POV) to present time and look back onto the past scene.. like example...during the dinner they had, that's when spencer recalls spending all day preparing..go into detail by mentioning the kinds of flowers the colors, say that he ordered in eraly in the morning was delivered bla bla bla and he had the key bla bla.. HAHA

shucks i hope you get what i mean.. just trying to help :) ermm hope i didnt get carried away..wells nice update anyway :) all the best with the writing! -anna

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Okay well yeah I can't believe you ended there, defiantly keep updating. It's good, but it just needs a little tweeking. I could beta read it for you if you need someone... I think that's what they call it, if not I am sorry.

short chapter, keep working on it...