That was really good 'sep for the few mistakes here and there. Could you please read one of my fanfiction stories 'How could you love a monster'? Since your good at writing could you tell me if its good or bad. If you do want to look my username is MiaxDanny.

Have you ever read "Quinnessential?!" I am all excited because "Quinn" and "Elliot" are the names of 2 other Slash characters from it. I thought this was sort of fanficiton for a fictionpress story. XD Sorry, had to get that out of my system.

I like Quinn's sort of bad-boysih/obnoxious way of speaking. ahah YES, QUINN. Jesus, he is SASSY and hot. Your writing is freaking straightforward, and GOD. The silhouette scene? GAHHH HHAH. And of course. Of course Quinn suggest something like that the end. xD Only for a one-shot, right? I would not mind ready more. HSHAH

I couldn't even spare time to come up with my extraordinary review. I was so entranced by this piece. I know you probably don't write or won't read this comment but I loved this! I'll use it as inspiration for my story! It was really an exciting and satisfying read. I loved that, I really did. When people get caught doing things they shouldn't in places, especially by a crowd, it's really, I just can't get enough. It was funny and I loved the characters. I have to say that I think Quinn was my favorite, I just loved his attitude. They seem like such a couple, probably get into things like this all the time. I can only imagine and wonder. I was also listening to a song that made, to me, the moment even funnier. I was listening to Save Room by John Legend. I think it was just perfect, it's so early in the morning too! Haha. Thanks so much for posting this! Wishing you the best.

-Thanks for sharing
-Continue to write

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Hahahaha this was pretty hilarious! They're teenagers all over again! Of course a silhouette of that is pretty hilarious!

This...IS FRIGGN AWESOME!MADE ME SMILE and UH IT ALSO WAS HAWT!Love Ell's and add it to my faves:)

This is amazing. I totally saw it coming, but it was still amazing.

this was amazing fun. i laughed so hard i cried.

OMG! HAHAHAHAHA!

So FUNY!

I rolled off my spinny-chair while reading this!

Lee

XD

deliciously fantastic, babe. _

that was the PERFECT blend of hotness and cute fluffy goodness and absolute hilarity! I loved every line! I just have to ask (beg?) are more Quin/ Elliot stories a possibility? because i would read/review/worship each addition _

wow. wowowowowowowowow.

i have read this story like 23 times now (i don't know why it took me this long to review), and just, wow.

ITS SO GOOD!

its the perfect combination of amazingly hot smut and cute gay boys in love and utter hilarity.

and this:

"-And by fruit, I mean apples. Not Quinn, though looking at him makes me smile too."

is one of the best lines i've ever read.

i just LOVE IT!

Yeah.

My cousin Shawn would thank you for this but... He's getting laid right now.

So my cousins/aunts/uncles/other relatives are coming over for Thanksgiving.

And my friend has me read this story.

Now, my gay cousin Shawn is sitting on my lap, and he reads it. Then starts moaning and laughing at the same time.

Shawn's boyfriend comes around, wondering what's going on. Jake reads it, then pulls Shawn into the guest room.

You got my cousin laid. Go you.

But yeah, I thought this was hilarious. xD

Keep on writing.

I laughed all through this, it was perfect! I love the way these two talked with each other, exchanging all those little quips... But now I can't look at Kitty the same way ever again... "What does this have to do with Kitty?" you ask? Her boyfriend's name is Quinn.

that was so fucking hilarious!