Reviews for Vain
BrokenHeart4Eva chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
i get this one too i no the feeling ive been there before
Victim of the Wraith chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
It's a bit like the second wife myth. How the husband always treats her better than the first. It's an awesome poem. You have a good display of wrath.

...Victim of the Wraith
RiddleSolved chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
the rhymes seems a bit forced, but I liked the theme.