Reviews for mined
saccharine lust aerial chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
each word is a diamond, and they are strung as sentences on gossamer strands-

beautiful..

"sometimesI want my skin to be lesspliable"
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
wow i can sense the need for space, but i dont noe how to explain; i understand the feeling great work

keep writing!
a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
'heartfresh offerings''great flowing latern orange orbs' 'voiceless songbird''for us to surface from the entrenched elevationsto which we've entangled each other.'-sigh- dear god, how do you have so much fucking talent? you're going on my favorites. i think i love you.
none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
The imagery in this is so powerful ("lantern orange orbs" was one I especially loved). I love the idea in this. Very good.