Write more, write more, write more! I want to find out what happens next! :)

That was pure cruel and selfish of her. She basically cheated on Brian...and she doesn't care much, if at all. Her virginity should have been given to him and not some stranger she met in a club. Her 'master plan' is stupid. I obviously choose the latter choice she brought up two chapters ago. Good chapter though.

Sorry about that previous review (it should have been "knows" rather than "nows"). And after reading your profile, I realize that you're from England not Australia! Sorry about that!

I really like your story so far! Are you from Australia or something? Your characters have an interesting way of speaking so I just thought that might be the case. I'm curious to see what will happen with her and Brian (now that he nows she's been with another guy) and also if John will play a bigger part in the story (I hope so!).

Thanks for the story!

Yay ur updating again! I loove this story! It was a little short but I'm just glad to have another chapter ;) haha

can't wait for more!

GASP! How could she!

Poor Brian

i enjoy Brian very much and i'm enjoying Rachael as well. She could be such a pain in the ass, i'm so glad she wasted no time expressing her emotions. i'm also very happy Brian is so cool. I want a neighbor like that!

Wow I just started reading this, and I have to say I kind of like it. It's a bit different to most other stories which makes it much more interesting. So good job!

It's been so long since this story has been updated! I'm kinda sad that Brian wasn't in this chapter and she ended up going home with someone else ):

can't wait for the next chapter!

uh-oh! practice what? :P i hope you update soon :) :D

Ep! They're so cute together ;)

WHAT?

That is the worst plan eva and its all going to go wrong. I can tell. YOU idiot. Typical cliche story line. Gr

LOVE IT THOUGH :D

Can't wait for the next chapter which I'm sure is guna be a disaster all round but it'll all work out in the end...WON'T IT? It better or i will personally fly over to France and spread you entrails all over the Arc de triumph.

Love you sweetie, :D

xx

so glad u updated again! i love this story and thought u had given up on it so when i saw that u had updated i was very excited! update son!

plz dont tell me this is the end of the story! i cant wait for the next chpter!

OMG! I luv this story! plz tell me this isnt the end of it! cant wait till u update it again!