|Reviews for Just for You to Know|
| Aithwayth chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
"too bad you lost more than you gain."
'Gain' should probably be 'gained'.
"The sky seems so full of life know that I think about it"
'Know' should be 'now'?
"but the warmth just keep growing now that you lost"
'Keep' should be 'keeps'?
Wow, very intense poem. I like it. It's honest, full of emotion, and different. Kudos.
| Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
I love the effect of the last lines.
"Just for you to know, your life is over on my terms" Great line. _~