Reviews for Just for You to Know
Aithwayth chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
"too bad you lost more than you gain."

'Gain' should probably be 'gained'.

"The sky seems so full of life know that I think about it"

'Know' should be 'now'?

"but the warmth just keep growing now that you lost"

'Keep' should be 'keeps'?

Wow, very intense poem. I like it. It's honest, full of emotion, and different. Kudos.
Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
I love the effect of the last lines.

"Just for you to know, your life is over on my terms" Great line. _~