Reviews for cut along the dotted line
Let's Play Cabaret chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
I liked the variation of print and spacing. It made the whole piece seem strangely artistic. Loved the second verse. Loved it.

-LPC
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Wow, I love this one and I like the format.
NurseDelilah chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
Your format kinda takes away from the poem, it's just a little distracting. Other then that this was a good poem, tons of emotion. But you should branch out some, ya know? Cutting is a little overused on here :]

Great job though b
Ashes.to.Acid chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
This reminds me of what I'm going through with my friends..my group of friends is splitting up, the ones that considered closer to me have backstabbed me and another two girls that I kinda knew, but not very well..and I ended up becoming closer with them.
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Wow, just wow, this is beautiful, excellent job!
Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Interesting poem, different again in the way you have set it out. Great work, full of emotion... beautiful!