|Reviews for Laugh|
| ygg chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
This sounds really powerful and intense, especially with the use of "sharp" and "shattered chains". I love the imagery you used here.. it somehow obscures the angst as the reader is forced to fill in the rest with his own imagination to complete the circle. Whether or not you did it on purpose, you played with that wonderfully! Excellent work I'd say!
| cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
I loved this, so effective. Keep writing.