Reviews for Daydreams
Nemonus chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
I disagree. But-that is psychology. Again your words don't quite to justice to the idea in their oldness, and in the blatant advice. But it is a compelling, depressing idea.
FireBreathingBeast chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
again, you write the truth. it was a slap in the face for me and you have no idea how grateful i am that God let you write it, and me read it. i needed that. So far i love everything i've read. Keep writing...
Needa S chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
True. Great write. Keep'em coming.
searchlight chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Yeah, I kind of know what I mean. I have a kind of similar poem on my site, sort of. It reminds me of dreams I've had where they're just awesome and life is so exciting and then...you wake up. Or you fall in love and then...you wake up. When I was in elementary school, I dreamtI was back in kindergarten solving mysteries with the characters from Aladdin. Waking up from that one almost crushed me...though I was still young at the time. Sounds like a cool daydream!
Herminia chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Oh wow. That was so great. You portrayed the feeling of escaping reality perfectly. Good job.