Reviews for Fall
Endless Nightmares chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
This was really sad. Captured the emotion. Nicely done.
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
This is a really nice haiku. I especially like those last two lines. You had some really intriguing word choice in this piece, and I'm sure a good title will come to you in time. Keep up the good work!
Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
You're actually quite good at writing haiku's, but I suggest putting your haiku's in one post or make them chapters if you're going to post so many. Like I said, though, you have talent.

Peace, Daze
an-angel-in-hell chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
This is good. 'Fall' works pretty well for the title... maybe 'Alone'? I dunno. Love the poem though! :)
LadyAnne04 chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
This was really good. Why don't you title it "Moment of Loss"? I don't know, I'm not that great with titles. Anyway, great job!