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![]() ![]() ![]() all i can say is that i thought this poem was truly, amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This breaks my heart. And the allusion to Shakespeare...wonderfully placed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just so sweet and sad. It was a beautiful journey down memories I never had. The allusions were amazing and it was a pleasure to read. I truly loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this one! haha sorry, I'm not good at giving useful feedback. all i can think to say, is that i really like this one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing especially these lines: "I’ll never forget those times we danced along the skyline or when you tried to jump over the moon in the water." |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw. :( excellent writing. so sad. -ZuriHanato/Sunshine |
![]() ![]() ![]() this made my heart break. so tender, bitter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() from "and the angels wept" until the end is my favorite part and particularly beautiful, but certain phrases all throughout this just catch my eye; "danced along the skyline", allusions to promise rings, etc. i adore it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know what to say... This is amazing. I tend to overuse that word, but it is true. I am stunned at the impact this had. It sent chills down my spine, and that's good. Beautiful imagery, the flow and rythm are... flawless. Keep it up! -benjamin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great poem! I loved "and the angels weptcradling my hyperventilatingheart out from the rain"...very interesting line...and I loved "Romeo and Juliet were never ment to be." ohoho such wonderful poetry! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so sorry for your loss. Wow. Great descriptions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very bittersweet with the mention of Romeo and Juliet in the ending but a nice touch to it...i loved your vivid imagery and that your short lines really made emotions stand out...this is really, really good! wow, why didn't i check this out before? lol keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Favorite line: "Happily ever after was written just for us." OMG, this is so heartbreaking. You get your emotions across well, and I can see why you got so many reviews! Great job. Keep writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really beautiful. good work, keep it up x x |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the links to Romeo and Juliet. The whole thing was amazing and I love the way its written. Its beautiful. |