|Reviews for forever|
| toinfinity chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
all i can say is that i thought this poem was truly, amazing
| prado.red chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
This breaks my heart. And the allusion to Shakespeare...wonderfully placed.
| barelyamiable chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Just so sweet and sad. It was a beautiful journey down memories I never had. The allusions were amazing and it was a pleasure to read. I truly loved it.
| xlilxleex chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
i really like this one!
haha sorry, I'm not good at giving useful feedback.
all i can think to say, is that i really like this one!
| Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Amazing especially these lines: "I’ll never forget those times
we danced along the skyline
or when you tried to jump over the moon
in the water."
| sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
excellent writing. so sad.
| Holly Rose E chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
this made my heart break. so tender, bitter...
| wind up car in motion chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
from "and the angels wept" until the end is my favorite part and particularly beautiful, but certain phrases all throughout this just catch my eye; "danced along the skyline", allusions to promise rings, etc.
i adore it.
| Benjamin - To Be Deleted chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
I don't know what to say...
This is amazing. I tend to overuse that word, but it is true. I am stunned at the impact this had. It sent chills down my spine, and that's good.
Beautiful imagery, the flow and rythm are... flawless.
Keep it up!
| nofaceme chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Great poem! I loved "and the angels weptcradling my hyperventilatingheart out from the rain"...very interesting line...and I loved "Romeo and Juliet were never ment to be." ohoho such wonderful poetry! Keep it up!
| boys kiss girls chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
I'm so sorry for your loss. Wow. Great descriptions.
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
very bittersweet with the mention of Romeo and Juliet in the ending but a nice touch to it...i loved your vivid imagery and that your short lines really made emotions stand out...this is really, really good! wow, why didn't i check this out before? lol
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Favorite line: "Happily ever after was written just for us." OMG, this is so heartbreaking. You get your emotions across well, and I can see why you got so many reviews! Great job. Keep writing! :)
| Smellen chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
this is really beautiful. good work, keep it up x x
| Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
I love the links to Romeo and Juliet. The whole thing was amazing and I love the way its written. Its beautiful.