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   toinfinity chapter 1 . 9/5/2011 all i can say is that i thought this poem was truly, amazing |
| prado.red chapter 1 . 6/25/2009 This breaks my heart. And the allusion to Shakespeare...wonderfully placed. |
| barelyamiable chapter 1 . 6/4/2008 Just so sweet and sad. It was a beautiful journey down memories I never had. The allusions were amazing and it was a pleasure to read. I truly loved it. |
| xlilxleex chapter 1 . 7/17/2007 i really like this one! haha sorry, I'm not good at giving useful feedback. all i can think to say, is that i really like this one! |
| Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 6/21/2007 Amazing especially these lines: "I’ll never forget those times we danced along the skyline or when you tried to jump over the moon in the water." |
| sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 1/15/2007 aw. :( excellent writing. so sad. -ZuriHanato/Sunshine |
| Holly Rose E chapter 1 . 4/27/2006 this made my heart break. so tender, bitter... |
| wind up car in motion chapter 1 . 3/10/2006 from "and the angels wept" until the end is my favorite part and particularly beautiful, but certain phrases all throughout this just catch my eye; "danced along the skyline", allusions to promise rings, etc. i adore it. |
| Benjamin - To Be Deleted chapter 1 . 3/6/2006 I don't know what to say... This is amazing. I tend to overuse that word, but it is true. I am stunned at the impact this had. It sent chills down my spine, and that's good. Beautiful imagery, the flow and rythm are... flawless. Keep it up! -benjamin |
| nofaceme chapter 1 . 3/4/2006 Great poem! I loved "and the angels weptcradling my hyperventilatingheart out from the rain"...very interesting line...and I loved "Romeo and Juliet were never ment to be." ohoho such wonderful poetry! Keep it up! |
| boys kiss girls chapter 1 . 2/27/2006 I'm so sorry for your loss. Wow. Great descriptions. |
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/22/2006 very bittersweet with the mention of Romeo and Juliet in the ending but a nice touch to it...i loved your vivid imagery and that your short lines really made emotions stand out...this is really, really good! wow, why didn't i check this out before? lol keep writing! |
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/19/2006 Favorite line: "Happily ever after was written just for us." OMG, this is so heartbreaking. You get your emotions across well, and I can see why you got so many reviews! Great job. Keep writing! :) |
| Smellen chapter 1 . 2/16/2006 this is really beautiful. good work, keep it up x x |
| Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 2/3/2006 I love the links to Romeo and Juliet. The whole thing was amazing and I love the way its written. Its beautiful. |