Reviews for Sketch
a headless butterfly chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
beautiful. there are some really gorgeous lines in this and the imagery and everything is so pretty.
Atelophobia chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Beautiful imagery, flowing words. I especially love the ending. Well-written. (:
cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
flows very well, beautiful images, continue writing!
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
wow i love this poem! beautiful. ' a breath between the ribs of a hummingbird' just great. il add it!
RedXfire chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
well this is one strange peice, its rhyming is kinda off but it has its egde nice job
forsakensmile chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
I love this. Urban dystopia has always been a major inspiration for me and this is like that.. Kind of. Wonderfully written.
The Postscript chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Wonderful...the flow, the grace and images - each so delicate and small but contributing in such a large way to the whole. Keep writing.
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
beautifully abstract and great personification.