Reviews for Crawing into the Bottle
4NeverAfter chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
Ok this is the last one and what a finally it is...I really really like it..Your really good at this writing stuff! Well the bell is going to read in about thirty sec. by and CHOW FOR NOW!
Color-Bind chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Lovely poem, though saying that seems a bit wrong considering it's contents. I especially like the last three lines. They provide a closing that leads the reader right back into the cycle of alcoholism, which in turn makes them keep thinking about the poems message. One thing you might consider to make it a bit more visually interesting would be to take out the parentheses and intead put those lines in italics, as their own stanzas. It breaks up the poem and that uneveness would, I think, draw the eye a bit more.