|Reviews for Music in my Veins|
| Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
I like how you used musical terms to reflect what's going on in your mind. I can empathize with that, as can all musicians...I guess that's how music gets written, no? anyway, interesting setup here. nice.
| With Rhyme and Reason chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Interesting, but ultimately a little unfocused. I can understand what you're trying to say in this poem (perhaps something about life being like music and you're the only one who "gets" it?-I'm not sure) but I don't think you ever just come out and say it, which might be your poem's downfall.