Reviews for Hit So Hard
Sunflower dream chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
i think it's a very touching poem/song, and despite that it made me smile because your phrasing is so much like mine at the end...
BlackDreamLily chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
Yay! cool poem- Poor guy! :(
Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
Nice, I really liked the last line...
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
wow this is amazing! I love it, especially these lines:soft words like a shy kiss

god, you kill me every time your glance slips

that half-smile and sucked in lower lip
forsakensmile chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
Pretty interesting song. It's touching yet doesn't even border on lame. Rare find for a love song.