|Reviews for Vegan Love|
| rightclick5ave chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
hi, thanks for the review! (:i read all six of your poems, and i really have to say that i didn't get most of them. maybe when i read them a third or fourth time i'll understand them more.
i couldn't bring myself to review the other five because it would be unfair to just say, "nice poem, keep it up". i really like this one though.
so is the title Vegan Love or Sushi Dreams? or are you gonna write more chapters? yesyes please do [:
these are my favourite lines, because they spoke to me: Her loyal watcher I'd remain / Longing to intervene / To hold onto those elegant hands.
how sad. i feel you. ):
| Em0tionally UnStAbLe chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
Wow! I Love this story! your poetry is pretty wicked! Can't wait to read some more though! Laterz!
| Haberdasher chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
the feelings behind this are very interesting; the way you describe this girl is so intimate, and yet its a poem about wanting to be intimate with someone youre not. i like this paradox. the images are lovely as well. all in all nice work. -The Lady Elaine
| GLP chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
well. that was interesting. i liked it tho. i don't quite get the title. why sushi? iz x
| in theory chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
So heavy with endless impossibilities and thoughts. Interesting, to say the least. Great job.
| A Page chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
that is beautiful. *adds to fave's list* (your the first there actually) what a great read.