|Reviews for The Cabin|
| Marjy chapter 9 . 10/10/2009
I just love every chapter. Keep on writing.
| CrimsonsNight chapter 9 . 8/17/2009
truely beautiful you must write more, i really love this story definately a favorite of mine XD
| BookishBrains chapter 9 . 7/9/2009
Hey, I really love this story. I know you haven't updated in a while but it's one of my favorites. Although, I really can't stand the whole Ivy and Armande thing. Much prefer that the hot vampire master catches the red head's attention. I really do hope you continue and post the chapters I haven't gotten the chance to read. Love it!
| pandacutie1313 chapter 9 . 8/20/2008
make another chapter its an awsome story... _
| PrickleyPear chapter 9 . 6/15/2008
yay keep going!
| LittleEmoKid chapter 9 . 6/1/2008
Love, I'm sorry that you seemed to have abondoned this piece. I really wish you didn't. For this is really good. I love your writing style. I can see everything so clearly. If you ever have the time to start up on this again, I would be much oblidged. Your characters are so full of life. Even the slaves. I really like how you describe Raoul. He's not a bad guy, but he's still the Master. Just because of this story I am going to try and find anymore writings that may have come from you. If you could, I would be extremely pleased if you could take a look at mine, and review please. Perhaps you could give me a few pointers. Well I am writing this at night so.. Good night. Thanks again for the magnificent story, and I hope you find the time to finsish it.
| Mika Kanami Hong chapter 9 . 5/9/2008
this is one really good story! you are great with detail and that kinda stuff... xD keep writing!
| Gfam89 chapter 9 . 8/10/2007
Very nice. But of course i knew you were going to be. So why haven't you updated yet? It summer! And i know you don't have school. Update soon, ya hear? lol see ya later
| TheShadowsRedemption chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
I read the first part, and will read the rest when I get some sleep. My only nitpick is that I do not think numbers are often typed out as numbers (example: 1, 8, 7, etc) and are worded (example: one, eight, seven, etc) in fiction. Otherwise, I saw no glaring grammar errors and you have a strong foundation for a fiction. I like how you briefed the scenario, provided some background information, and so forth before introducing the character while not providing too much background information to ruin any possible surprises in the story. The only thing I personally do with my fictions is try to introduce the particular places while I could, but try to do so where I am showing people and not "telling", if that makes sense...if I can help it; so far you showed a scenario as opposed to fully "telling" it, which adds more of a verbal component than a descriptive component when writing if you "tell" it as opposed to "showing" it. I congratulate you on avoiding that. At any rate, keep writing! I look forward to more. I myself am trying to get back into writing and fictions like this inspire me.
| Blackangle2011 chapter 9 . 7/25/2007
| Sexy Vampire Princess chapter 9 . 4/12/2007
Love it. I be waiting for the next update. Please update soon
| Kraheera-Raven chapter 9 . 2/21/2007
I love this story, I really do. I want to learn more about Ivy, and about why Raoul is such an ass.
| verify-me22 chapter 10 . 9/22/2006
Wow big year gap in the lastest chapter but i found i liked it.
Armande and Ivy's affair is sweet but personally i'd much rather see Raoul and Ivy together. Does he love her? Are you going to explain how he became obsessed with her? It seems there is this sudden unexplained relationship between them.
| Kay chapter 10 . 8/28/2006
Hannah! Its Kahyla :) Havent talked to you in forever. Anyways... heres my review...
I like what you have so far. I think it is interesting, though I have to admit I have found multiple grammar and spelling mistakes. If you would like me to read your chapters before they are posted so I can correct certain things, I would be glad to.
I think the little love affair between Ivy and Armande is interesting, and I love how Raoul took advantage of her like that. I think, though, that it would make things more interesting if Ivy gradually came to like, adore, and then fall for Raoul... then things would really heat up with plotting, jealousy and anger :)
| Angelical12345 chapter 10 . 8/22/2006
omg no! you should've developed a romance between Ivy and Raoul.. *cries* why? ick.. servant loves a servant... its so.. realistic... yuck.. other than that dislike, its well written, good job. update more often. (Raoul and Ivy woulda made a beter couple! she should luv him!)