| Reviews for On Opposite Sides of the World |
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   TaurusGirl7 chapter 3 . 1/29/2006 shes a regular little spazz isnt she? well, update soon! |
| EnchantedKorean chapter 3 . 1/29/2006 omg...i luv it! so far 1 of da only stories w/ literally no grammatical mistakes! luv your details...it's really good...can't wait till you update |
| Stevshals chapter 3 . 1/29/2006 I love this story. It's very interesting. |
| bulletproof.cupid chapter 3 . 1/29/2006 heh. this is quite good... especially to someone who's up at what, three a.m.? nya, ryno's cool... she's extremely quirky and impulsive. mm, she seems so keen on liking julian for some reason... i mean the 'why aren't my knees turning into jelly' and other shit keep making me think that. alex seems like a weak character right now, if he's supposed to be the major? or correct me if i'm wrong, it's julian...? because as you said, alex clearly is the 'god' in this high school and the summary says they become something more? in that case, the need more encounters... (sorry... lack of sleep, so forgive the stupid comments) over all, i thought it was really good. i'm actually wondering why you don't have more reviews... beats me. you're doing a wonderful job, mechanically and otherwise. keep at it, hun... and i'm off to bed. night! ~bubbl3gum |
| Nerdette chapter 3 . 1/28/2006 I love it, but I love Rynora more! |
| Under the Stars chapter 2 . 1/21/2006 haha improvising and cat fights. what a way to spend the day. i love where this story is going. very interesting. and very funny. can't wait for the next chapter |
| Glow100 chapter 2 . 1/20/2006 This was a gd chapter i especially liked the drma bit and the cat fight bit very gd i hope there will be another chapter |
| radha chapter 1 . 1/20/2006 haha forgetting to uncap the test tube. classic. my lab partner did that once - thank god for our protective gear. |
| pixie-girl-1231 chapter 2 . 1/20/2006 Great sory! I love Rynora's personality. The improve scene between Julian and Rynora was great. Update soon! |
| Cercie chapter 2 . 1/20/2006 Hey hey! Just found your story and so far i'm impressed. I like the characters and Rynora has a fun attitude. The last bit where Julian and Ryn (Sidenote: wiht a name like Rynora I can see being called Ryno as a kid, no matter what she looked like, but that's random) jump into character and have impromtu dramatics is very funny, and something I've actually done with a friend once, spouting thees and thines for our own amusement. Your writing is pretty good mechanics-wise with only a few little typos that don't affect the the reader and hold up the story, I will definately read on to see where this leads. 'Til next time. |
| alyssa chapter 2 . 1/19/2006 this story is so entertaining, i love it lol. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Unfeigned chapter 2 . 1/19/2006 Hey!I really enjoyed the first couple chapters. It's really enjoyable how you are writing Rynora (sweet name, by the by) as a three dimensional character. She said Pacfic when she meant Atlantic, and things like that. It serves to make her more human, which is good. Really anticipating more sparks!-Unfeigned |
| TaurusGirl7 chapter 2 . 1/19/2006 update soon! |
| Vaudeville chapter 1 . 1/11/2006 I love it. Frig, I love it when there's hysterical laughter. It makes me cry. can't wait till the next chapter. :)k-cigs; |
| evilblackcrayon chapter 1 . 1/11/2006 hi, great job. love it. got no negative feedbaq really... xcept that i dont think uv really explained ryanoras position in skool. update soon. |