I love your writing. You make the main characters strong and interesting but still human. There are plots and secrets and intrigue in your writing.

Please continue!

Seriously, you absolutely need to continue this story.

I adore all of your work and I can't get enough, so...

PLEASE!

Please continue this story! I am most intrigued by your 'setting the stage' so I do hope you will add more! PLEASE! O.O

If you ever wrote a book I'd buy it.

This reminds me a bit of The Bastard Malfoy...maybe it's just Kate's name. Otherwise, it's pretty good ] The plotline seems fairly strong and there's just enough character history to make it interesting. I always liked your writing style.

Interesting. Written really well. Will you continue it?

This is very very intriguing. I really want to know what happens next! I hope you continue with this because honestly right now I'm a bit disappointed that this isn't a book; if it was, I'd probably not be able to put it down!

Good writers are so hard to find...especially good writers that have handsome, intelligent, seemingly inscrutable male leads in their stories...

lol I followed you from too! ) I love the fact that Kate can read him, and of course, I always love your male characters. Is this going to be continued?

I was glad to find that there was another site available on which to view your creative endeavors. Kate does indeed deserve more of her own setting, and Julian Montfort is deliciously reminiscent of a certain Malfoy, as I'm sure was intended. There is a certain something about those Malfoy men, n'est-ce pas? You've given just the right amount of background, deftly thred into the delicate balance of a first chapter. Your storyline is solid thus far, your characters impatient in wait to reveal themselves further, and your writing leaves little to be desired. You have the gift, please do your characters justice and continue this story. God Bless, a Fan

Yep, I followed you all the way here from . What can I say? Good writers are hard to come by.

A couple of things, first - at the start, Kate doesn't know why the suitor is so hard to drive off. Later on she does. I could tell by re-reading that the kidnapping took place after she found out, but you may want to clarify that a bit more.

Also, this seems very similiar to your stories about the Malfoys on ; the name Kate, Muntfort having grey hair and silver eyes, etc. I don't know if this is intentional or not, but I just thought I'd point that out.

Now for the good stuff... Very interesting premise; the damsel not-quite-in-distress and the Lord not-exactly-looking-for-a-wife (so far). This could get quite interesting. The story starts off solid, giving us an overview of Kate, and all the background information is given in enough of a roundabout way to not knock us over.

And most importantly, its interesting! I hope to see more soon. This isn't just a oneshot, right?

Nice beginning to an exciting story! I 'm loving Kate already. However, I think it would be better if you can indicate what time period this story is set in. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what will happen next.