Reviews for I've moved on
Blood in Water chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
This is gorgeous; the round-about way, the easy way the words flow.

I read it aloud, and I just marveled at it. Beautiful word-choice.
InspirASIAN chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
i should send my x this

Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
_ *applaudes*, great work! So short, yet so effective. You're really good at those kind of poems!

How have you been? Send me an e-mail sometime, i'd be great to hear from you!

Bye now! _

Brian chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
Its good seems like the ffej story to me though to bad he wont read it
Jeffro the Clown chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
Well I don't know what to say other than I guess do what's right in your heart...-Jeff
Abby Sequioa chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
wow, can we say BLUNT? nice poem lol
Melissa O'Day chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
It was good, but it didn't flow. But other than that it was really good! P.S. are you in Power of the Pen this year?
BJ Worth chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
interesting poem. Maybe some imagery would improve it a bit.