|Reviews for implode|
| Chi Ame chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
It's amazing how different the world is through your eyes, and I'm stunned everytime I get a glimpse of it.
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
...wow. this is just stunning, the impact the furious tragic and heartbreaking emotion...wound so tide and exposed so raw. really mesmorsing to read, and really moving.
| rocket baby doll chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
you blow my mind.. omg, wow.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
Elegant, sorrowful, and haunting. There's little more I can say; none of my praise would do justice to it.
| dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
oh wow. beautiful. this is... just really good. wonderful. amazing.
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
i like what you did with stutter. Nicely written, good emotion.
| midnightowl chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
from one broken soul to another
your words can sever a soul and that's something that is powerful
being hurt is awful but it makes for some great poetry, no? ohh yes. like that song by garbage- i'm only happy when it rains. ha. we're all masochists. i'm sorry i haven't updated retrospect in a while (a week? two?)... i havent been inspired for it recently and i've been writing a lot of (crappy) poetry. i think. whatev.
i loved this. sorry if this review didnt make much sense.. i'm running on very little sleep. last night was spent writing this damn ivan ilyich essay. and im exhausted.
| Hotkitty chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
omigasp. *tacklehug* i usualli dont review poetri. at all. but it's so beautiful the way u wrote this rite now and ilovelovelove u (heartyou) to pieces, dear. and im so gonna go thru this poem rite now 'cause its the onli effing thing i kan think of doing because ur just so brilliant and ur writing is so flawless (all the time) and i love the way u do it.u inspire me on nearli everything to do with writing and i appreciate it so so much. (ive wrote 6 poems cause of you:D) iheartyoutopiecez, :P.
ilove the way u started it -ur lil philosophi from dh and it makes me think about the whole bleeding on ur own terms. i love that philosophi so much and id steal it if it werent urs. love the brackets; once again, it gives the line a double-meaning and the ribbon? makes u think of a ribbon choking someone, cutting off circulation. or, in the context of cutting, it could be a ribbon of blood. and the whole white christmas thing. "white" christmas. blood tinges snow red. loveli contrast. it wasnt a white christmas, like it wasnt a pure, happi christmas. as u said earlier (cant u (let me) be happi for once) its like ur saying that wen she/he's not happi, ur not happi either. pplz moodz affect ur feelings. and their actions are always of consequence to others. that sucks so bad and i wish it didnt happen, but it does. everyone always has to affect everyone else so effing bad.
“& you (think) clutching yourwrist over the sink means thatyou’re better than me?”
im not sure about that. tho, i hav an idea. iz it like, just cause u show ur pain in that sorta way doez it mean that since i dont show mine like that that urs is more serious.
i’d kissyourlips withmy bloody mouth to thank you (so)why are you crying?
i love the dark romantic-ness. and the way u prolonged the stutter, as if someone was actualli stuttering. ive gtg now cause its realli late, but remember i heartyoutopieces and this poem kiks ass.
| likes to headbang chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
| re x invented chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
i love this poem, the emotion that went into it, and especially the last line. love it, love it, love it.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
ohgod, this was so fucking gorgeous ilovedlovedloved it. everything you write is so fucking wonderful, & this is no exception. it's completely heartbreaking & leaves me breathless.
| contrast and friction chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
This is.. just.. amazing. It's so artistically written. It leaves a mark.
Powerful beginning & ending to the poem.
I like formatting. It builds the emotion in the piece.
Just beautiful. All of it.
| callmebelle chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
breathtaking... it flows so beautifully and is so artistically written... just amazing.
| MallowsWins chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
This is less poetry and more art. It belings somewhere where people who will see it for what it is can find it.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
this breaks my heart in all the rightwrong places.