Reviews for Please don't kill me again
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
very powerful! great job!
HeirOfAthos chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
I can understand why people take this piece wrongly. I know you attempt to be metaphorical, but without reading your summary I'd think it was the rantings of a homicidal freak. Try to add some more concrete details and not slip in the word "kill" so much.
xTempestx chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
very powerful. i like it.
Icthoid Matro Coselos chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
Cool poem... interesting thought/feelings! keep writing!