Reviews for Red Door
B. S. Armstrong chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
Very interesting... I love the idea of the man who sort of watches iver the worlds w/o watching over them...anyways, I can't really think of anything to ask other then how did he learn everything, like how to talk etc. and you had said something about how he kept time, will we ever find out how long it was that he had been watching the doors? Anyways, Don't take too long to update!
Cailin-Rua chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
Hey!I enjoyed this. You asked for I noticed a few grammar errors, someplaces where a comma was not needed, a place or two where there should have possibly be a semi-colon. If you would like advise and an editor for your writing email me. It would be hlpful to me to practice my editing skills. As far as the story itself goes it has much potential. Im looking forward to the next chapter.

Later Days!Jess