|Reviews for Cold Steel|
| Crucified Sanctity chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Dragonforce lyrics :P
Could do with some punctuation in there, punctuation creates a good manipulation of the way its read.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
i like the assonance at the beginning it's really effective. excellent addition to sword mytholygy. cool. i really liked this one.
| Caitlin chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
I don't have anything bad to say, but I do love these poems. I haven't read the stories yet but I will get to them. keep up the good work and I hope that you will write more soon. and so you know right now Eragon, which I am reading is an awsome book. i'll give a comment soon if I don't like one of your poems.
| S. M. Sargent chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
You have good rythem but I think the theams are a little on the nose, they're too obvious at the end.