|Reviews for Changes|
| Simbara chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
i liked your story line but it isnt really... real. Could you please tell me what a line of pot is? it's a little bit confuzzling.
| frannie-pants chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
haha uhm yeah, it's not really possible to do 3 lines of pot. you can do 3 lines of coke, but not pot. you don't snort pot, and it doesn't come in lines.
| Mr. Smith chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
This is unrealistic! Im in jr. high and that would never happen. i know people smoke pot, but this is nothing like how it really is. and i agree with the other person, do more research on your drugs b4 you make it into a story. and what the heck is a line of pot? and you said the mom passed out but then she was running around finding a dress? proof read your stories b4 you post them... PLEASE!
| no chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
perhaps you should research your drugs more, because you can't do 'three lines of pot.'
Also, check your grammar. and rules in making new paragraphs. etc.
| lostandwandering chapter 1 . 1/11/2006