i liked your story line but it isnt really... real. Could you please tell me what a line of pot is? it's a little bit confuzzling.

haha uhm yeah, it's not really possible to do 3 lines of pot. you can do 3 lines of coke, but not pot. you don't snort pot, and it doesn't come in lines.

This is unrealistic! Im in jr. high and that would never happen. i know people smoke pot, but this is nothing like how it really is. and i agree with the other person, do more research on your drugs b4 you make it into a story. and what the heck is a line of pot? and you said the mom passed out but then she was running around finding a dress? proof read your stories b4 you post them... PLEASE!

perhaps you should research your drugs more, because you can't do 'three lines of pot.'

Also, check your grammar. and rules in making new paragraphs. etc.

please continue.