Reviews for To the one who might just be the one
XaviaerCage chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
"like a pulsing screaming aching heart

the pain of endings before they start"

Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
Fascinating presentation - the rhyming was a bit disjointed but otherwise it was a very interesting idea. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
notso darling chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
i like how you made everything scream alive. there is something very rare about this poem.