Reviews for I Can't Stand It
Kinoda Junn chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
Oh man. You're the second person on fictionpress who's stuff I've read and I didn't stop reading after two words because it was pure garbage. Bravo. I read and re-read this piece and I really enjoyed it. It captured how I feel constantly and feels like something I would write. The rhyming was good, albeit, a bit overemphasized, but I write the same way, I just am not a fan of that style. Other than that, and the first line (which I would have only removed the word "back"), this was an excellent poem. I've added you to my favourite authors and I plan to read more of your stuff. I hope you'll read and review my work too, I'd appreciate it very much. Good job!