|Reviews for Memories in the Rain|
| Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
oh wow! i REALLY love the last stanza, but the whole poem is just fantastic! you are a wonderful poet!
| DisturbedKittenWriter chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
This is absolutley beautiful! I can almost hear you reading it :) Great job!
| Imagined chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
That made me think I have to say. Good job though :) I love this and all of your poems. Thanks for reviewing. glad you cared to read :)
| Embellished Heart chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
Beautiful words used. Just a beautiful poem.~Dana
| xalter-egox chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
wow! that was an amazing poem. You are a gifted poet. Your line breaks were in the perfect places, and I like how you broke up the verses as well. My favorite line was: "Thoughts come and go like waves." It's such a good similie! Nice job.
P.S. Thanks for the review!
| Rhianika chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
Hm, I wish rain could wash away all my sorrows and pains, but I guess I have a few too many of them, lol! But then again, in a way it does. I totally love rain and come from a place where it rains a lot, so this has special meaning for me. I really like it. Have I mentioned I love how you write? Hehe.
| NovelJ chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
Hi. Thanks for reviewing my poem, thought I should return the favor. I read a couple of your poems and I really like this one. It flows nice, and it just sounds soft. Like a pastel painting. Beauty that can't be captured with harsh red strokes.
| alter-ego52 chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Beautiful... very well written.
| nofaceme chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
beautiful. I think my fave. line was the "thoughts come and go like waves." wonderful piece! Keep it up!
| Let's Play Cabaret chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Somehow, this poem's serenity overrided the absolutely obnoxious whirring sound that my wonderfully up-to-date computer is making. I liked it a lot. Keep writing.
| NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
thanx for the review, btw,...this is realy good, you have a strong talent in writing poetry and this is a beautful peice.
| TinuvielDork chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
This is beautiful!
I've always been partial to comparing feelings/emotions with nature, so I adore that aspect of this poem. You have a very easy, simple, natural flow to your words and the rhythyms. Also, you make it so incredibly easy for the reader to picture the scene in their mind.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
I really love those last two lines.. awesomely done
| An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Wonerfully written, the imagery and description was wonderful. Unique and beautiful, it's awesome! Great job, keep it up! Btw, thanks a bunch for reviewing "Vacant on Valentine's". I'm glad you enjoyed it.
| believe-in-happiness chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
I reall liked this the imagery is really beautiful. Your use of alliteration is very effective. Fab1