|Reviews for The Ultimate Knowledge|
| Aegof chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
You did very well in making this sound like a fable.
Punctuation around the quotation marks confuses me, but that might just be because I'm not used to not-American punctuation.
Also, I wonder if it was necessary to add that the protagonist was in his teens? "Teens" is not a very fable-y word, it seems to me, and I'd think simply "young man" would work just as well.
| Needa S chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
He turned out to be a very wise young man after all. Awesome write, I enjoyed it muchly.