|Reviews for When She Cries|
| Faith chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
It was beautiful
| ronshaberry chapter 10 . 10/18/2006
Psh, awesome! It's done... how sad. Beautiful, magnificent end, and I like that it ended bittersweetly. It was meant to be... sigh. Great! I'm looking forward to more from you! :D
| Aquafied chapter 9 . 8/8/2006
ah, the emptiness of life sometimes
| ronshaberry chapter 9 . 8/7/2006
Ah... nice. The description and imagery is wonderful. I feel like I'm right there. Yep. Awesome! Write more. :D
| ronshaberry chapter 8 . 5/2/2006
Dang. How old is this guy? But awesome! YESH. Characterization! It seems like a ...dysfunctional-ish-bordering type of family. Whatever.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 8 . 4/28/2006
This chapter has a wonderful, starkly created scene. It gives just enough detail without giving away too much. It also describes a great deal of characterization. Your image use is so qiuetly strong. Not overburdening the reader with excess detail, but just enough. Well done.
| Aquafied chapter 6 . 4/26/2006
really makes me stop and think
| Aquafied chapter 5 . 4/26/2006
really, i could say it over and over.
and the title, its like a lost puzzle piece somewhere
| Aquafied chapter 4 . 4/26/2006
ahhnever angsty, i love this
its like a beloved old story i had been reading forever.
| Aquafied chapter 3 . 4/26/2006
and shorter is better
in all actuality, yes
i can write and write. but when you have that one time where it comes out just right
| Aquafied chapter 2 . 4/26/2006
ah, something about thisthe blank mystery
it is really nice
| Aquafied chapter 8 . 4/26/2006
reminds me of today
for some reason, just now actually
anyhow, it was much more polite
i am going to go read the other seven chaptersyay
| ronshaberry chapter 7 . 4/4/2006
I was born in September. In the middle-ish. Hm... Wow, this is dramatic and sad.
"Under swirling skies, I closed my eyes, because seeing nothing was better than seeing her in this cold refuse."
Refuse? Like poop? O_O;;x
That's so sad. Poor little girl. I can't remember how old she is either.
| Aquafied chapter 7 . 4/3/2006
i havent been followingbut i like this
| hyperjokia chapter 6 . 3/8/2006