|Reviews for Seven Sins|
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
lechery, gluttony, avarice, wrath, envy, sloth , and satan. so i'm guessing satan is pride. my favourite stanza was sloth. the last line was chilling...good write.
| trash can art chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
O! I liked this idea a lot! I have one suggestion, though. You might want to consider taking out the '(sloth)', etc., parts because they take away the mystery and leave the poem looking like a list. While you don't want this to be so ambiguous that the reader just gives up, I think you might want to break it up differently so that it adds to the flavor.