|Reviews for Melting Wax|
| RedMonocle chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
This is gorgeously portrayed! I can feel the simmering fire behind each word, especially each time you mention wings.
"The candle melted from the heat of the sun."
For some reason, I can't help but pick up on a hate-love sentiment just from the placement of that line right at the very end. Very resonant. Great job.
| serialxblahblahblah chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
"I think I hated her, today,But then I saw her cryingAnd her only wing left unfolded"
That's my favorite verse.
Someone sounds angry. Rawr.
| multiples of six chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
I can't say I understood all of this.. but it's still, in a way, magical. I like it - I like each stanza separately - but I don't see continuity between them & I'm not sure if it's just me! Tell me!
| Rhapsody's Shadow chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
I have only one question, were did you get your muse and are there any left?