Reviews for scent of perfect
acrobia chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
What an amaizing piece! The descriptions are so tangible, everything that is writen here is felt, I loved the lines "glossy dark lips" and "yin and yang horizon line" - they are beautiful expressions that really fit in this mood piece; all the description is perfect, very image-invoking, its like a mouthful, but a good one - I am left wanting more. The ending I found a little funny - the axe comment, hehe, and I agree that sometimes deodorant kills the moment, lol, it adds a lighter mood to the piece, and I think it fits here nicely. This is a piece of art! Lovely! Keep writing,xo - Acrobia
lackluster chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
i love it and hate it when poetry has this kind of nostalgic effect on me. that last line especially.

humorous, yet true.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
m. Love it, I know what you're saying. I especially love the ending bit, it's really a surprising little sentance.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
the last line has a light lining of a humor to it. good job on this.
hear me smile chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
You get it.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
full of physical imagery. i love the way you described the scent so perfectly. nice work!
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
wow beautiful imagery. lovely work!
randompoetry chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
Wow, just brilliant. Every bit of this, and I especially loved the clever ending. You used great imagery, I could imagine the way this person smelled, I could feel it. Good job.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
oh, this was beautiful. i'm adding to favorites, it was just so gorgeous. scent is my favorite sense. ever.
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