Reviews for No Fun
Moosher chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Wow.. really sad poem. I like the rythm and the flow of the poem. and I recognized the first line as soon as I read it.. I liked how you used it though.. and how you repeated "No fun" adds alot of emphasis to the whole piece.. Good job.. Write on!
toxic-noodle725 chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
oh that was such a sad poem. i lovd it.
Ryustorm chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
Really true and touching. i like the playground focus, and the teachers part. really good work!the last line tied it all together really well.