Reviews for lovebirds
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
lovelovelove it.
O-o The Orange Moose o-O chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
And, oh my gosh, I love this too. How.. just.. cute! you are... my hero. For right now.
boys kiss girls chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
haha... its true XD
and calliope said chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
I'm going to imagine every couple I see as a pair of birds, now, thanks to you. Wonderful.
always gats b y chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
haha... that's so true. this is sweet. it made me smile. :)
bjw chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
:)

This made me laugh. The ending just gives the whole thing a quirk. Very good job! It just reflects the rowdy immature-ness and gossipy-ness of primary school children...at least to me. Love the bracketed line - it's almost like a flood of teasing and shouting and blushing and plain acting immature, haha. Very good! Could really identify with it. Keep writing!
Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Lol...very cute poem; well written, and made me laugh, especially because I can see these lovebirds, behaving much like high school students, and twittering and chirpping job.
primal injection chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
the flow to this was actually amazing. Really liked.
forsakensmile chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
I love this, especially the last line. Very telling.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
lol amusing but really sweet. you got your own voice in this, and that makes it that much better. keep on writing!