|Reviews for Hurts to Breathe|
| AmbroseMaximilien chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
each breath reminds us we are part of this world and we live in it.
but the scars on our arms are what set us apart- we are the people who frankly either don't want to be here or can't stand being here, so we cut to release it. perfected pain is what sets us apart.
| brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Aw. It's so depressing (I shouldn't be talking.) But I love all the unhappy stuff. Keeps me happy. Oh, the irony. Anyways, I especially love the title. It's quite fitting for the poem that follows. Well done and keep up the good work!
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
Interesting. I liked the end those (scares) are still marking me against the world) just the way it was worded really stands out. Its nice a short, which is good for this piece. I like how you didnt capital the i's, for some reason that just struck me.