Reviews for Hurts to Breathe
AmbroseMaximilien chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
each breath reminds us we are part of this world and we live in it.

but the scars on our arms are what set us apart- we are the people who frankly either don't want to be here or can't stand being here, so we cut to release it. perfected pain is what sets us apart.

beautiful.
brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Aw. It's so depressing (I shouldn't be talking.) But I love all the unhappy stuff. Keeps me happy. Oh, the irony. Anyways, I especially love the title. It's quite fitting for the poem that follows. Well done and keep up the good work!
randompoetry chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
Interesting. I liked the end those (scares) are still marking me against the world) just the way it was worded really stands out. Its nice a short, which is good for this piece. I like how you didnt capital the i's, for some reason that just struck me.