Reviews for The Dark Side is Taking Over Me
significant-dust-speck chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
So sorry the dark side is winning. Rememeber that not all who wander are lost. And the dark side has never comepletely won.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
I like this.. very creepy and powerful... nicely written
iknowthethirdthingaboutpoetry chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
Har. God, I'm being pulled to the dark side because I'm just being a reactionary and overly melodramatic teenager hungry for attention. Hence, it's your fault, God; you're to blame if I suddenly do bad things and get thrown into jail. Of course, I really did want to be your follower, but I didn't feel your undivided attention, so I left church in hopes someone (possibly parents, old friends, etc.) would try to drag me back and that way I know that they care except for they're too late. They didn't listen when I was screaming and crying. Ha, that'll teach them if I end up a prostitute or a little wee-wee in the head or dead from overdosing or whatnot. It's playing hard to get, you know, God? In any case, if I get blamed for anything, it will always be your fault, God. Your fault. Just because, you know, I don't have any control over my thoughts and actions.

Girl, you're so amusing. Keep writing! :]
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
This is really beautiful and I think you did an amazing job!

Much love, Rosanna.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
[i know it is like super late but i just realised this glorious fact] HAPPY BIRTHDAY!


really, you are imporiving wonderfully.

~* noelle
queenvixta chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
This is amazing, so powerfully written. I really liked this and I could relate to quite a bit of it. You can tell it's a personal piece to you and that makes it stronger. Great job! QueenVixta