|Reviews for The Weaver|
| Noctame chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
Hi! I love your story, and its terribly (not horrible but well done) detailed! I had a bit of trouble with the dialogue, which i think you have to edit properly. But i love the first chapter! keep working on it!
| Marinus chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
I like the style of this. The natural, offhand way you have of portraying magic is a refreshing change to be-all and end-all magic that rules the world. A very interesting beginning, all told, though you do need to separate speakers on different lines.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
You need to start a new line every time someone new speaks, not bunch it all together into the same paragraph.