|Reviews for Big Brother Earth|
| theory of black chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Wow, that is really good. Its really, really deep. Good job.
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
love your last line...and I am stewing over "Treasure" - wishing I thought of that, it's really good...
| Morcirith chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
woah there dirty talk. kidding, it was nice.
| blacklives4ever chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
I really like the line where you say "that You're a beautiful soul." I like how you capitalized "You're," because it makes her seem almost godly and holy, it seems to fit right it. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but it was effective. My favorite lines are the last seven, though. They are somehow just so self-explanatory, they could almost be a poem alone without the rest of it. But I'm glad you have the rest. You're truly gifted, I love redaing your work.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
Lovely word choice and conflict of emotion in this. The feeling in the scene builds well, as the ending was somewhat unexpected. Well written, with real sincerity.
| Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
Like I told you already, this poem is written very well. The last line of this makes my smile. You have a way with words and expressing powerful emotions in them. Yet you doubt it and just say that you have a 'flair for the dramatic'; that's always been a saying I've liked actually. So keep on writing, keep on dreaming, keep on living.