So much character!

okay, I know a lot of people like the cliche crap, but COME ON! This has got to be the most unoriginal thng ever, and maybbe you could pull it off of your writing was more mature, but this story is not creative, not well written, and i screamed at it a trillion times until I finally skipped to the end. I doubt you will read this comment, but I hope you can see what I mean as you mature as a writer...Good wise? Well, you have voice as a writer, kinda, its sorta in there. THat's what drove me to even rea the ending so...nice

Great story! Please, please continue!

i just loving this story...all the drama between jake and Mel is just amazing...i hope they stick together till the end..

hi gal just watched yo video

srry i watched it a lil bit late

cuz lik

i'm in Australia so ya

nwayz

srry dat u didn't win

yo video waz lik so

gud lik your stories seriously

i bet u u didn't win bcuz d host of dah lik show

thought u's were 2 gud n dey were jealous

dat u mite be lik a script writter for celebs n all

but lik seriously i swear yo video was gud lik really

realy realy realy very very gud.

P.S thought u shuld hav won n' oh yeah r u gonna write more of this story. maybe u shuld tranform it into a film 2

oh ya, u shuld do dat seriously u shuld k.

... ...real..name..Imuetinyan...

"Boys. They add one simple ingredient like alcohol into a cake and suddenly your balls grow back." Hahaha. Even though it's a filler I liked reading this chapter. Please continue updating this story! :-)

Congrats on being selected for the competition!

I voted :) good luck! I rly hope you win & that Eric's cake will turn out well.

It has been quite awhile. I dunno if I've ever reviewed you before (Your story was actually the second or third I EVER read on FP and it was my first favorite, so kudos to you).

I've come to know FP since then, I've read tons of stories, started some of my own and felt the deripening grip of writer's block, but it's all good (everything eventually is).

It's strange to see you update. I thought this was a dead story now, but I'm glad you did. I'm thinking of coming out of the rut I'm in now and writing again (though my stories are pathetic in popularity to yours, but that's perfectly alright with me).

Anyway, I'll see if I can find that fresh films thing. Hope you update soon (again) and glad that you came out of your reclusion!

- Racquet

Lolz... She's kind of slutty.

Aw, I hope Jakey and Mel just stay happy. They've been through so much. :D Anyway, I'm in love with your story. Please don't leave it here, just update! xD

Please update soon! It's an interesting story!

Aw so cute!

x

I love this story!

yay! im so excited that they finally got together :)

keep writing! i cant wait to read the next chapter

xx

Wow-zah. Denny's a character but Gary's my favorite.

Please oh please update,

E.

UPDATE SOON!