Reviews for Fly |
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![]() ![]() ![]() my mother is always telling me that she has given me wings to fly... wings to make my dreams come true... i think this poem encapsulates all that she is trying to tell me about my wings. beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if this was intentional, but I love how the lines taper down as you read. Sort of like you're taking off. I think there might be a typo on line eight, darn little keys. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A sense of freedom. Yay! Everybody wants that. I like the rhyming scheme. It works well with your descriptions. Well done! |