Reviews for lullaby
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
This is so soft and dreamy and beautiful. Everything about it is so lovely. Wonderful poem. Keep writing! :)
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
beautiful, deep; it just brings out so much with how little it spoke.

~* noelle
randompoetry chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Brilliant, beautifully written, very romance.
bjw chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Ohh, so soft and sweet and gentle.:) I love the imagery - it's really alluring - the way you meld candlelit romance and passion and emotions together. "the darkness is one with your eyes/together in spirit we rise/oh, we rise." Wow. The feelings - I'm impressed by how much the poem says..between the lines. This is good! EXQUISITE poem!
forsakensmile chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Beautifully written, very romantic and dreamy.
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
oh wow I love this. It's so beautiful. it really is lovely.