Reviews for The Wedding
Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Good, but I think it comes across as too idealized. Your poem describes a Hallmark greeting card wedding, but without any believable details - a description of the hall, the need-the-work band or the ultra-cool DJ, the new In-laws, who's drunk, who's jealous, who's bored? the clutter of wedding gift on a small table, outside weather, culture or religion of the wedding? I'm not saying your wedding won't be perfect, but it probably won't be what you expect which means it may be better and more amazing than you expect because it won't be like you dreamed it. Dig deeper into yourself and think of it on that level.