The diction, the repitition-it's all so lovely. I can't decide on my favorite aspect. You have a fan in me, my lady. :)

All I can say is WOW! : )!

realy good poem. the imagery sorta does flow in its own unique way. kinda like there's the picure of the flower underneath while the poem goes on. all in all, pretty good. keep on writing!~Peace

this is very good... beautiful, gentle, moving, and intense wrapped around excellent word choice an a interesting approach and style. well done!

i like this one, it has a symbolic gust to it. And with what was said can also display the part of emotional feedback the writer portrays in oneself. very nice.

This is so tragic. Beautiful, but tragic. Good job.

Very nice had a very full sense to it.

~Sejse~

Fresh, interesting description from the viewpoint of...a flower! Different style. Good job.

very good. very descriptive. i loved the part about small children's toes and "crumbling between gypsy's fingers." keep writing!

Nice job. I like your metaphors and such.

A beautiful poem, one I enjoyed reading very much. Keep writing, as you're very good and thank you for the review!

wowie, I love this poem! it is so pretty. and deep and realistic. it isn't one of those flowery poems that go on and on about the beauty but are totally superficial and unrealistic. You capture the beauty of the flower by showing its strength and trials. Love it! Write on!

it's so pretty! really well written, i liked this a lot, especially the imagery which you scattered throughout. well done, i really liked this. :) lionessrampant

Beautiful. It leaves me with this overwhelming feeling of sadness, but hope at the same time. All from describing a flower... sounds crazy, huh? Anyway, great work!

Your poetry really does paint a picture, just as you said in your bio. This is adorable! I love how you bring different kinds of people and situations and unite them all with this flower.

Oh, by the way... your title, check out the letter arrangement.

Thanks for the review!