Reviews for Early on the Moonbeams
SaraLuffsYou chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
Brilliant! Good descriptive words. It flows nicely and makes sense. 10/10
eldrin chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Haunting. The words are remarkably full for a poem that leaves me so empty.
bleed gilead chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
i love this. it's so soft and graceful; love the repetitions, love "nothing, nothing, but a purple butterfly and a rusty anchor"- it's so softly hopeless, so quiet and gorgeous. but "empty bottle" seems a bit forced-in, to speak, without much of a lead-in, jarring and short- sort of breaks the mood...
Herminia chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
Very well written. Your word choice was particularly effective. Good job!
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
I like it.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
if you really did come up with this while writing all night, that's genious i think. i can never come up with things at night, i vomit on the page and call it poetry. it's gorgeous the way this was written, i love it. the feeling to it makes me stare. it's lovely.
elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
I love this. There is a certain sense of hopelessnes...that is rustic, and ancient, but just newly discovered. So much for human effort, huh?
Aquafied chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
like the repeating, its pleasant

rivers again in this. and dunes, love your use of landscapes, but a lot of the poems seem hopeless lately.