Reviews for Shattered Souls |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I think this might be better if you turned it into a poem. It certainly has poem like language and phrases. Interesting imagery. A little confusing but that's okay because of the subject matter. I wanted to hear more about the other person you were referring to, especially after reading your summary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this. would have made a nice poem. i like the line about darkness cracking, and 'but then they fall and so do i'. nice work. |