|Reviews for Shattered Souls|
| Kella Trams chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
I think this might be better if you turned it into a poem. It certainly has poem like language and phrases. Interesting imagery. A little confusing but that's okay because of the subject matter. I wanted to hear more about the other person you were referring to, especially after reading your summary.
| just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
i like this. would have made a nice poem. i like the line about darkness cracking, and 'but then they fall and so do i'. nice work.